I have been taken.
Forcibly forsaken.
Barely surviving, to provide for another’s comfort.
Squeezed and packed as a parcel, unable to contort.
I live, caged in someone else’s house.
Missing my home, children and my spouse.
Back there, they are praying silently with hope
Thanks to their prayers, I am able to cope.
I work in this region that is foreign.
Land, when compared to mine, is barren.
All these plants look like a fake.
Even the water feels like a mistake.
The worst part is that my tears cannot be seen;
They melt silently into the blue and green.
A small dedication to all those forcibly taken from their homes to serve elsewhere.
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Week (June 9 – June 16) – 101 words.
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I am in awe of this poem! I love how you have interpreted the theme. Very clever. 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. 😀
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Again a very pensive poem! It’s amazing how you always find words to rhyme. Like the dedication at the end too.
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To each his own. Comparing music is something I look at in awe while taking photographs is something musicians look up to while you find my poetry amazing
Thank you 🙂
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What a wonderful poem! It is so sad and shows what this fish feels like being taken away from his home and family. I never thought of fish being able to feel feelings like this, but this story shows that – hey, it could be a possibility! I hope he gets reunited with his loved ones.
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Two words – Finding Nemo.
But then, this poem is for all those who are separated from their friends and family.
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Yes, of course! Finding Nemo.
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Excellently written, Karthi! =) Loved the poetic approach to capture the essence of the picture.
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Thanks Archana. 🙂 😀
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Very nice. Is there a story behind the poem? I’m curious.
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Actually no. I’ve read and heard of people going abroad in search of jobs. Also I’ve also studied of slavery and bonded labour.
So actually, there isn’t just a story. There’s history behind the poem.
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Awesome job on it. I Feel for the poor fish in my tank at home now.
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Better take good care of it. Else it might write a poem too 😉
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Bad time to say I turned same fish into sushi then
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-_-
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you. 😀
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Nice one! Very emotional and I particularly like the last two lines!
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Thank you very much :). Glad you appreciate it
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I saw the last sentence and went back to read all over again, trying to imagine their position and – ah, that was really heart-breaking. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you for those kind words of compliment. It was heart breaking indeed for me when I read about such humans in History lessons.
Well, let’s just hope that history never does repeat itself.
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that moment when you realize that it’s a fish in an aquarium, and it breaks your heart all over again because your fish is an excellent allusion to so many people who are working elsewhere from their family.
My feelings will not be repressed. you must allow me to tell you, how ardently i admire your blog
-J
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I know right. And sometimes, those workers hardly have a choice but to work to feed the fires.
Sometimes, these hard workers might also be students put away at hostels, working day and night to learn to do the same, in the future.
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I like the soft and pure flow of thoughts here. I especially like the last two lines.
They are perfect!!!
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Thank you so much for those kind words. I appreciate it very much. Glad you like them so much 🙂
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A great poem. 🙂 No one – no matter what their species – should ever be forcibly taken from their home.
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Rightly said…
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I particularly enjoyed the foreign/barren rhyme, but the entire poem is great. Such an original interpretation of the prompt, too 🙂
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Thank you. A compliment from you is great. Especially as I really enjoy your work. 😎
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I love the theme of your poem. It’s so meaningful. I hate to see animals in cages, pens, tanks or any other type of enclosure (unless for the purpse of beeding endangered species). The way you referred to the enclosed environment as foreign and barren was perfect.
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Thank you so so much for this. I can see we share similar ideas with respect to giving respect to animals.
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Totally agree. I cringe every time I see birds in cages and fish in tanks! And I refuse to go to a zoo unless it’s one with a breeding programme for endangered species.
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This was beautiful. *feels the goosebumps on the neck*
🙂
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Many more coming soon.
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Beautiful, poignant and raw… love this!
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Thank you 🙂
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You are most welcome 🙂
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